3. The
night before.
22nd
May 2036
Lilian
the hacc man.
Hey Lil, Marcus was throwing a party
at his place. I’m nearby if you wanna
lift
:)
No thanks.
C’mon man! Everyone’s there, even
Unger probably.
Where is it.
Marcus’s house in New Oakland.
No
Come on man, please!
I said no.
Fair enough.
Chat ended.
I pulled up
to Lilian’s apartment block in my car just as he walked out the door.
"Get in Lil."
“RHYS, I
SAID N- “
“I know
exactly what you said.” I said, “Sitting in that apartment all day, doin’…
whatever it is you do has changed you man!”
“Don’t- “
“Back in TRANsport
you went to almost every party the other drivers had! Sure, you didn’t do much,
and I had to ask you to come most times, but you were there man! You were with
me and the rest of ‘em!
“Working at
TRANsport was one of the worst things to happen to me!” He snapped back.
“This isn’t
about TRANsport, Lil. Please, just come.”
…
We stood
there awkwardly for almost a minute until Lilian let up.
“Ok” he said, “Bit I’m
not happy about this whatsoever.”
For the vast
majority of the journey Lilian didn’t say a word… or move, come to think of it.
He just looked angrily at the back of my seat. Then again, Lilian did have a
reputation of holding extremely long grudges against almost anyone, from a guy who
pushed him in the streets around a year ago to a Wendy’s employee who got his
order wrong back in University.
It’s crazy
how long I’ve known him. The first time we met was when he started college back
in ‘22, when his sister Margo was in almost all of my classes. We were seniors
and he was a junior, but his intelligence (at least in technology) was through
the roof. When my PC broke down, Margo said he would fix it for me. Just a day
later he’d completely rewired it, replaced the graphics card, he’d even polished
the thing. He definitely knew his stuff when it came to tech. But the same
couldn’t be said about his social life. He didn’t strike me as someone who
would even leave his apartment, let alone fly from Oregon to Pennsylvania. Then
again, sending someone to Philly University because their older sibling went
there was pretty common in the 20’s, since they were offering reduced student
fees, making it one of the cheapest universities to attend back then.
As I drove
through the rainy streets of San Francisco, I saw the usual sights. Old
American buildings dilapidated and abandoned, and newer buildings, mostly chain
restaurants and apartment blocks, in peak condition, as if anyone who even
looked at it funny would get sent to re-education. We passed a least 5 “war
memorials” and 10 government approved anti-American graffiti walls. Most of
them were either the UISC’s flag with one of Chairwoman Brie’s sayings, or
cartoonish send-ups of US President McTavish. I honestly don’t know how one
nation could hate one guy so much they payed graffiti artists to directly make
fun of him. He wasn’t even such a bad guy… well, he didn’t do much, just
occasionally going to meetings to improve foreign relations with some country
in the middle east or giving funding to charities. Why the UISC’s government
hated him so much was beyond me…
I realised I
had driven all the way from San Fran to New Oakland without even knowing. Strangely
enough, Marcus’s house was just around the bend.
I pulled up
into a spare parking space outside his house. Surprisingly, Marcus actually
owned a house, instead of one of the many flats in the towering Oakland apartment blocks.
It was also in pretty good condition, with clear glass windows, faded brick
walls and a polished wooden door that wasn’t ripped off its hinges. It was like
a house from Old Oakland was plucked from the 90’s and placed in the modern-day
towering neighbourhoods of New Oakland.
As me and
Lilian got out of the car, we saw a man standing completely still on the
pavement. He seemed to be looking out at the Alameda re-education centre. I walked
towards him, only to realise it was Unger, of all people.
“Um… Unger?
You good?”
“No, I’m not.”
He replied “I’m looking at my office. Seven years ago.”
I was
confused.
“I worked as
a re-educator in that place for seven damn years of my life. Seven years of
guarding the cells of innocents. Seven years of watching the UISC break people.
Seven years of seeing pain, loss and sadness. The words on the front of that
centre said
‘Udv a pokolban'… ‘Welcome to hell”. It was sad I was the only one there who knew what it meant. I could have started a riot or, tackled the guards of an interrogation. I could have done anything to save those people from the backhands and water hoses of those evil people who laughed as innocent civilians lost their minds. The worst part is I have no idea why… I have no idea.”
‘Udv a pokolban'… ‘Welcome to hell”. It was sad I was the only one there who knew what it meant. I could have started a riot or, tackled the guards of an interrogation. I could have done anything to save those people from the backhands and water hoses of those evil people who laughed as innocent civilians lost their minds. The worst part is I have no idea why… I have no idea.”
Through that
entire speech, Unger’s eyes never left Alameda. It was a haunting image. It almost
reminded me of the ending of Apocalypse Now, where Colonel Kurtz spoke his last words. Lilian was strangely unaffected by
Unger’s speech.
Suddenly, he
snapped out of his trance and noticed I was there. “Sorry, Rhys… It’s just…”
“Unger don’t
worry. Just- just come inside.” I said.
He gave me
an understanding look. “Yeah. Yeah you’re right.”
I had seen a
side to Unger I had never seen before. He was usually a motivational speaker
who always thought of his team first, who was always as charismatic and
understanding as they come. But I had just seen him at his lowest.
But it wasn’t
a time for feeling sorry. It was a time for Marcus’s party.
I like how you use dialogue - you demonstrate real confidence with that element of writing, which actually is not that easy to pull off! So well done you. I work with lots of grown ups who really struggle with getting dialogue to sound authentic. Your characters continue to be interesting and you show a maturity beyond your years in your writing. Well done!
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